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Barefoot by the Ocean: Midnight in Bretagne, France

Filed under: Uncategorized — Bob at 8:03 am on Wednesday, November 2, 2022

by Robert M. Katzman © October 30, 2022

 

So dark a night 

Only a single star

Can break through the clouds

Winds here so cool and damp

Waters gently lapping

Coming toward me

Leaving me behind

The white foam a subtle necklace

Offered to me by the Sea

The North Atlantic Sea

***

“Come to me”

It seems to whisper 

Barely a hush as the small waves recede

As the small waves approach

“I will embrace you with my waters

My necklace soft around your body

Come closer to me

Do not fear me, Stranger

My enveloping arms

Will keep you forever

Come sleep in my Sea”

***

I listen in my mind

The sensuous invitation

The cold sand under my toes

Shells cast-off by seagulls

Sink under my heels

I do not respond to temptation

Imaginary or actual

Danger, evil, seduction

All my old adversaries

My decades on Earth

Sometimes…

Perhaps too often 

I’ve surrendered to you

***

But the Tidal sounds 

The Tidal sounds so constant

An ever-repeating anthem

The Musician never wearies

I close my eyes

Listening 

To the music of the Tide

To think about where I am

***

This distinct part of the world

Projecting off of massive France

West toward nearby tiny Britain

Once a mighty empire itself

Now a small island

The world has passed by

***

Beautiful Celtic Bretagne

Tiny as Massachusetts

Brittany to strangers

A world unto itself

A land for the Bretons

I see their unfamiliar names 

On every street sign

Under the French names

***

Subordinate in present history

Subordinate in culture

Subordinate in present status

More tolerated than embraced

As the Sea offered to me

The choice to disappear within it

I see the hypnotic 

Swirling of their Celtic art

I see their massive stone Megaliths

Vertically stoically standing 

In their ancient patterns

***

I see their tall beautiful women

Smiling their Celtic Smiles

Piercing dark eyes 

Seeming to say:

We descendants

Our unconquered genes

Demanding you look

Insisting you see us, Stranger

We, the Bretons

Our music 

Our language

Our art

Our bodies

We, are still here

***

The Moon peeks through the

Clouds above me

Kissing the water 

With weightless lips

The light seeks me out

Finds my small Silver Star

My Judean Star

Responding to the moonlight

Shining brightly at Midnight

Saying, I too remain

And you Distant Moon

You still remember me

From thousands of years past

My neck only the current

Possessor of this endlessly

Pursued Silver Star

***

I am in Bretagne

A land filled with 

Medieval Churches

Sunlight pouring through

Christian stained-glass art

Magnificent ports

Land rising and falling 

Toward Finisterre

The ends of the Earth

Giant wave after wave

Crashing! Crashing!! Crashing!!! 

Against sullen tumbled 

Masses of ebony stone

***

Winds blowing from every direction

My greying hair 

Responding freely

My face battered by spray

My body, my emotions

Encapsulated by

The magnificence of the moment

Wind, Sea, Rocks, Sky

My brief fundamental 

Place in Time 

And I wantonly absorb them

Cool my mind, I plead

I don’t want to remember

But I do

***

In the 13thCentury

People like me

Dark-eyed

Dark-Haired

Olive-skinned

Members of the Tribes

Carriers of our ancient Order

Chosen, then Commanded to tell 

Whomever they encountered:

Destroy your idols!

There is but one God

We, detested Messengers

Emptied from so many lands

Waiting, waiting, waiting  

For our next Upheaval

Our next Apocalypse

***

A land powerfully beautiful

Tall stone Cathedrals 

In every old stone town center

Cemeteries rolling over 

Quiet landscapes

Their beloved Savior 

Mounted over every grave

In rusting metal

Carved in stone

Sometimes their Sainted Mary

Etched in marble

Were banished from Bretagne

900 years ago

Bretagne remains emptied of Jews

***

I have looked everywhere 

Seeking a single Synagogue

But we as a people

Don’t exist anywhere here

Bringing to me 

A desolate loneliness

***

Oh Bretons!

 I feel something powerful here

My slight enduring  

Judean Star

Responding to the Moonlight

Shining fiercely 

Seemingly saying, in response:

***

I too remain

Do you still remember me?

From thousands of years past

My neck only the current

Possessor of that Silver Star

Bretons, my Brothers

My Sisters from lands past

***

We both remain

Battered by Time 

You and I are still here

I wish my Tribes

Like you 

From across a churning Sea 

Would return here

Return to Bretagne

Shalom, Bretagne

Now I leave as well

Shalom and Farewell

Beautiful Land

***

So dark a night 

Only a single star

Can break through the clouds

Winds here so cool and damp

Waters gently lapping

Coming toward me

Leaving me behind

The white foam a subtle necklace

Offered to me by the Sea

The North Atlantic Sea

***

“Come to me”

It seems to whisper 

Barely a hush as the small waves recede

As the small waves approach

“I will embrace you with my waters

My necklace soft around your body

Come closer to me

Do not fear me, Stranger

My enveloping arms

Will keep you forever

Come sleep in my Sea”

***

 

Some thoughts I want to pass on about how this difficult-to-write poem came to be:

I wrote that “Barefoot” poem slowly, first in my mind for three weeks, all in October 10 thru 31, 2022, later on paper. Then rewritten after that when back home in my own small quiet town, Racine, in eastern Wisconsin. 

Racine was founded in 1834 as Port Gilbert by Gilbert Knapp, a lake captain, it adopted its present name, which was derived from the French word for “root,” in 1841. 

The brown Root River winds through the town today.

The French name has intrigued me. I looked up the history of the area: In 1634 French explorer Jean Nicolet was most likely the first European to enter what would become the state of Wisconsin. The area remained under French control until 1763, when it was acquired by the British. It was subsequently ceded to the United States by the Peace of Paris treaties in 1783.

So, I left a historically French place for my honeymoon to go to visit the original owner of the land, then returned to it, in a haze of French-ness. A here and there feeling, but also a now and then feeling as well. I am of course aware that the Native Americans were here for thousands of years before the Europeans arrived in North America.

There were two stories I wanted to tell, because to me, they were intertwined, but not necessarily understood that way by other people.

To me, it wasn’t the Bretons who were the oppressors of the Jews, because they, too, were also severely, culturally and linguistically oppressed by the majority population of French Catholics. 

So, my complicated feelings of cultural/ethnic/religious isolation in Brittany, were more vaguely historic than current. 

These emotions were also colored by my long ago, six decades ago, awareness of official French complicity with the Nazis in rounding up and deporting 77,000 Parisian Jews in World War Two, including 12,000 children. 72,000 Jews were murdered in concentration camps. About 400,000 Jews still live in France today.

At the same time, I was awed by the beauty of Brittany, the friendliness of its people and also its small villages, sometimes enormous Cathedrals rising among small ancient stone buildings, the art and present day customs. 

So, that’s the swirl of emotion I felt on the beach at midnight. 

I didn’t want to write a story, but to try to express it poetically in word-images and sounds.

It became 20 stanzas of different lengths, about 220 lines and 832 words. I wanted the emotion, my despair, to flow down through it vertically, as if to Hell. 

And the emotional confusion of experiencing a never-before-seen geographic place on different levels while at the same place, and also through time, 900 years at one point. 

Maybe other people haven’t felt what I did those first nights in Brittany, but what does that matter? This poem is my experience.

It was my desire to capture my vivid emotions, and also the “why” of them to people with no connection at all to any of it: 

France, Brittany, Bretons, Jews, geography, Celtic religion and music, the North Atlantic Ocean sounds of Tidewater at Midnight and my seeking what wasn’t to be found. 

I hope my poem works as an ethereal mixture of all of these things, and that strangers who never met me will become involved with the words and images, if they can. 

I am not seeking to please anyone. That seems to be impossible.

Rather, I wanted to create a record of the invisible.

Robert M. Katzman

November 3, 2022

***************

 

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2 Comments »

Comment by Brad Dechter

November 2, 2022 @ 9:17 am

Loved the imagery in the beginning! The way you imparted your thoughts to us and told the story you wanted to tell deserves a medal- perhaps a star (?). Oh wait- you already have one.
Thanks for sharing- it’s really fascinating that you have such talent!
Brad

Comment by Jim Payne

November 2, 2022 @ 12:12 pm

You gave us a picture of a place in poetic words as seen by your unique soul still alone waving goodbye.

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